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    the eldest daughter

    sometimes I am a melting icicle or glacier; tiny slips drip dripping away, cascading down cold-blooded cheeks.
    By Niamh Elliott-BrennanApril 17, 2024 Creative 1 Min Read
    Art: Ellie Robertson
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    sometimes I am a melting icicle

    or glacier; tiny slips drip dripping away,

    cascading down cold-blooded cheeks.

    I begin to shrink,

    thawing into a puddle

    of still water, unpotable.

    a puddle absorbed into linen sheets

    and carpeted floors, dispersed and dirty,

    immobile. invisible.

    sometimes it is so cold that the melting 

    stops     I reach for brisk air and snow

    flakes, stretching my wings gelidly.

    but it never lasts long and

    I begin to fall apart once more.

    little by little, I chisel at my ice

    with precision known only to woman;

    until     something snaps. and I crack

    in two, three, dozens of me

    scattered in melting cubes of ice.

    strong impenetrable ice that could crush

    the skulls of men and crumble mountains,

    and yet I thaw at the slightest touch.

    ice poem the eldest daughter women's honi 2024

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